So, because the system indiscriminately chops up bigger files, I've decided to re-upload Thursday Afternoon - in four separate chapters. Each should be small enough to avoid a multi-page fate.
That said, there are two important things to note:
1) If there is another problem with the formatting, I can't do much to change it. Sorry.
2) Future day parts will probably be uploaded in much smaller chunks, so hopefully updates should start becoming more frequent. Hopefully this manages to avoid the problems I've had so far with Thursday's stuff.
Some of you readers may have noticed that there were a few issues with chapter nine. I wasn't aware of them until someone brought them to my attention (my primary internet connection is the school's, which has parental safety stuff on it; as a result, my time on here is limited).
Anyway, I've re-posted the chapter, removing the color from the background (that should fix the odd thing with the blue on page 3), and noted for the moderator where to insert page breaks. Hopefully the latter part works... if not, I'll need to break this section up into three individual chapters.
So, I was made aware that my attempt to copy/paste the text for Wednesday Evening meant the italics didn't show up...
I've resubmitted that portion the other way (as a webpage), so that problem should be gone once the submission goes through. I've also made a number of small edits through out the entire story - basically, the entire story has been re-posted. In about two days, check it out again and everything should be right.
As far as Thursday morning goes - I'm still in the middle of writing it, and it may take me at least a few weeks (depends how well the creative juices flow)... so please bear with me on that. Its shaping up to be a very active and sex-filled chapter, so its worth the wait.
Wednesday Evening has been posted and should appear soon. Meanwhile, Thursday morning is underway, although I have no idea how long it'll take to finish and get edited.
Apologies in how long updates are taking on both the NiS story and the Midnight Visitor. Midnight Visitor is going to take awhile, but I'm making headway on the next chapter of the NiS story (hopefully it'll be done and up in a few weeks). When I have a more guaranteed schedule, I'll post it here.